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We're All Mad Here: Part Fourteen

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The wind whistled through Hiccup Liddell's hair.



His dress billowed out behind him, the cold wind whipping his cheeks.



The Hatter's realm stretched out in front of him, cogwheels and teacups as far as the eye could see. Jack M. Hatter was somewhere inside those walls, ready to strike the brunette and take him prisoner.



Hiccup swallowed hard, clutching the Vorpal Blade with white knuckles.



He stepped confidently into the teacup that would carry them across the wide chasm. The ride jolted to life, forcing the teen to hold on tight with his free hand.



" Hatter always hated mechanical malfunctions. This disaster is either his doing, or his epitaph."
why are all these parts coming out so short

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How do you put so much emotion into something short


how?